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To: Anne Kong (Director)
From: James Wong (Administration Department)
Date: 2 March 2012
Subject: Complaint about Sounds Systems Exhibition 2012

Dear Anne

I have received a concerning the Sounds Systems exhibition we organised at the Fortune Hotel. Please find details of the complaint below, as well as my suggested solutions. A copy of the original complaint is for your reference.

1. Online Registration System

Attendees had registering online for the event. These problems with the online registration system to have been due to the capacity of the server. For future events I we upgrade our hardware to enhance our service to our customers.

2. Venue Size

Another problem was to the size of the venue and over-crowding. Those attending the event complained that there was a possibility of due to the large crowds. The sized venue was booked as we did not expect the exhibition to be so popular, so I suggest in we make better estimates and then book a larger venue for events.

3. Lack of Leaflets

The popularity of the exhibition meant that at times there was a of leaflets. In future we could make sure a larger number are printed and also the number each person can take by employing distributers. I think it would also be a good idea to have an e-version of the leaflets in order to our commitment to sustainability. This would also be more cost than printing leaflets which in the end are not taken.

Perhaps in way of compensation we can offer the free tickets to a future event as well as electronic copies of the leaflets he could not take.

I hope these suggestions are and I look forward to your .

Regards

JW